Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Please read my poem and comment, thank you?

I really couldn't grasp the last stanza of this poem, but it seemed to me too deep for some reason. Why didn't you put the (, and .) on the text? That made your poem a little bit hard to follow. And sorry that I can't make any comment on this poem for I don't understand the last stanza which seems to be the key part of the poem....but I liked the style, it is like a story adorned with common incident and environment which but tried to convey an unconventional or uncommon philosophy....and I like dramatic poems in approach, it is like playing with the mind of the readers, that's all I could help this time....but did you mean that the son doesn't marry because he loves wild life or nature more than the marriage or bond with human lives?

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